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« on: April 07, 2012, 11:27:14 PM »
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« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 10:56:13 AM »
I hope this doesn't turn out to be another dead-end aquatic creature Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2012, 01:34:28 PM »
The only issue is that you misspelled "Hemodohve".
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« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2012, 08:04:46 PM »
Fixed the error.
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« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2012, 05:50:25 AM »
"Females are larger than the males, typically by at least 40 cm, and are roughly twice as aggressive". Which gender is 40 cm long? And which gender is twice as aggressive? You may want 2 seperate sentences for this.

Also you may want to describe how the new breeding works.
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« Reply #5 on: April 11, 2012, 09:05:31 AM »
Quote from: jlind11 on April 11, 2012, 05:50:25 AM
"Females are larger than the males, typically by at least 40 cm, and are roughly twice as aggressive". Which gender is 40 cm long? And which gender is twice as aggressive? You may want 2 seperate sentences for this.

Also you may want to describe how the new breeding works.

The Females.
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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2012, 04:58:50 AM »
well he needs to clarify it in his wording.
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