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« on: October 11, 2008, 04:04:11 PM »

Nice on.
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« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 04:39:24 PM »

Why would you say its stalks taste like asparagus. How about since this is Sagan 4 just saying they taste like Marshtail...since asparagus doesnt exist on Sagan 4.
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« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2008, 05:42:47 PM »

Why would you say its stalks taste like asparagus. How about since this is Sagan 4 just saying they taste like Marshtail...since asparagus doesnt exist on Sagan 4.

I disagree, though I think it should be changed to Earth's Asparagus because Vegehoppers taste like Earth's Cucumbers
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« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2008, 09:00:55 PM »

Why and how did it change to green coloring?



If anything the fruit can be green but not the leaves. It can't just change its type of photosynthesis.
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« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2008, 04:29:48 AM »

fixed
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« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2008, 06:41:11 AM »

Wow, nice pic sagandude I love the detail on the clouds. I love the neatness too. Great job Smiley.
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« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2008, 09:30:12 AM »

Nice Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: October 12, 2008, 02:42:58 PM »

fixed

Thank you. Much-o better.
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« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 02:35:17 AM »

Good work sagandude, however, like i (and Neo)have said before, and i may be the only one to be bothered by this but, i think that when you write the name of any sagan organism in the description it should be non capital letters unless the sentence starts with that word.
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« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2008, 02:47:28 AM »

Like it's ancestor, it is a very common plant in the marsh, and reproduces in the same way.
This is something that caught my eye: the word plant. Perhaps the word "plant" should be replaced with the word "flora" or even with "floral organism" (which is what I personally use in my own writings for my own personal alien 'plant' junk). I only state this of course because plants and animals are terms that would not find use offworld, as plants specifically refer to Kingdom Plantae while animals specifically refer to Kingdom Animalia. With that in mind, taxonomy itself would be absolutely different on another world straight up to the Domain category; that is, unless, a world was affected by panspermia, as afterwards it would keep the same domain titles as the mother planet, for the organisms transferred over. *nod*

Also, I'm holding off on my modification of (very small) grammar nazi things in the description until I know whether those should be changed or not, as then I can just do it and save you all that trouble, if you would prefer. Just doing my duties as your friendly neighborhood smart alec.

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« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2008, 10:38:10 AM »

fixed.
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